Mutual Blog Reviews - Indo Dreamin

Site: Indo Dreamin owned by Avi
Mutual review: Read Avi’s review of Infektia.net

What strikes me first is: Where is your header?
Am I missing something here? From what I can see is a huge white space before your blog starts. That’s really unnecessary if you aren’t planned to have a header (it’s preferable, it just need to be as simple as your blog’s name). It makes me wanna scream and run away actually ;).

Also if you click on “Home” on your blog it will take you to… your other homepage? Why not set it to the front page of your blog instead? It will only confuse the visitors.

You might wanna change the colors of your blog as well. The orange will hurt people’s eyes and the blue text on that background doesn’t look good. And change the text in the sidebar to align to the left instead of right.

Since I see it’s a Blogger blog I know there aren’t much you can do with it, but here is a tip for you; If you don’t know how, or don’t have the time, pick a premade theme, just something that is more visually appealing than the one you have now. Cause I’m going to be honest and say that it scares the visitors. You can take a look at some free Blogger templates here for example.

Content wise you have some really entertaining posts. And you have pictures in them! Yay! I like seeing pictures along with good content (however, don’t set them to be centered all the time make the text go around the image instead, it’s more visually appealing, and it’s easier to not loose the “story” while jumping down from an image). However I haven’t have the time to digg through your whole archive.
I really enjoyed your Books archive though, and I see that you enjoy Neil Gaiman! So do I!

I also read a lot of good posts in the 18+ archive, so good that I want to invite you to be a contributor/writer to Pleasure-Buzz.com! If you accept the invitation, send me a notice and I’ll send you the invitation link!

Since you have such good content, it would be a shame to scare off visitors because of the design of the blog. Change it, and the visitors will come… and stay! And by the way, more information about the author wouldn’t be bad either! ;)

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1 Response

  1. Avi Says:

    Mahalo Malin! I have been needing some feedback for a long time now. Right now I am eye deep in work but after things cool off a bit I would really like to be a part of Pleasure Buzz. I did see a cool product I have been wanting to review for a while now but every time I venture to buy it I get strange looks from theclerk. I will take your advise seriously and probably come back to you for a few pointers in the up coming weeks when I start making changes to my blog. Have a good weekend.

    Posted on April 20th, 2007 at 9:07 pm

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